2014考研英语大作文三段写作方略一

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2014考研英语大作文第一段写作方略:
    第一句:图画描述句
    第二句:图画影响句
    1. This picture generates a great concern among the public.
    这幅图画引起了公众的极大关心。
    2. This picture invokes the general public's interests.
    这幅图画引起了公众的兴趣。
    3. This picture has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo, the most influential social media in china.
    这幅图画在微博上引起了热烈的讨论。(中国最有影响力的社交媒体)
    4. This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the We Chat, the most influential social network, these days
    最近，这幅图画在微信上引起了热烈的讨论。(中国最有影响力的社交网络)
    5. This picture captures the online community's great attention and abundant imagination.
    这幅图画引起了网络群体的关注和想象。
    6. People were drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture.
    人们被这幅图画所揭示的事实所吸引。
                    

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    第三句:图画意义句
    1. Simple as the picture is, the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than
    what we may sense at the first glance.
    虽然图画很简单，但是作者却在传递着比我们第一眼看到的要复杂很多，深刻很多的意义
    2. This simple picture touches a deep cord of the complex social fabric.
    这幅简单的图画深深触及了复杂社会结构的一环。
    3. The drawing truly displays a status quo that is worthy of our attention.
    这幅图画确实展现了值得我们关注的现状。
    4. We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.
    对于图画所展现的问题我们无法忽视。
    5. It is tempting to accept the picture by its simple appearance, but to neglect the profound implication that its
    author tries to convey.
    读这幅图易望文生义，忽视其深刻主旨。
                    

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    第一种类型:
    当下所面对的“无形社会问题”的写作步骤:
        负面的展开:
    适用于不好的社会问题，社会责任，传统美德，品质的缺失
    可能用到的主题词:
    1.爱国主义(Patriotism
    2.努力工作(hardworking
    3.勤俭(plain living，
    4.相信科学(belief in science)，
    5.为人民服务的意识(consciousness of serving the people)，
    6.团结互助(solidarity and helping each other),
    7.诚实守信(honesty } credibility and being trustworthy，
    8.遵纪守法(observation of the law
    9.中华传统美德(traditional Chinese values
    勤hardworking俭Thrift信honesty,，孝filial piety/ filial duty/filial respect
    礼courtesy,忠loyalty,
    仁benevolence，humanity and humaneness爱affection
    10.现代美德(modern virtues
    志愿者精神(volunteer spirit)
    契约精神(spirit of contact, observation of the law, abiding faith of the law
                    

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     第二段的展开:
    …第一句:…
    The picture does reveal that lack of credibffity is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal
    life ,but to the further development of the whole society.
    …第二句:…
    In no country other than China, it has been said, is this problem more urgent and serious.
    或者:
    The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out,
    bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.
    或者:
    The past three decades have witnessed our overwhelmingly excessive emphasis on material benefits and
    unawareness of the importance of credibility which have been increasingly becoming indispensable to the health
    of economy, the stability of polity and the pursuit of happiness.
    过去的三十年中，我们过分的强调物质利益，忽视了诚信的重要性，而诚信对于健康的经济，稳定的
    社会和对于幸福的追求而言都是必不可少的。
    　　…第三句…
    More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice
    the damaging consequences of dishonesty when undergoing the dramatic social transformation.
    更具体的讲，在经历剧烈的社会转型的过程中，个人，企业，组织甚至是整个社会都没有能注意到诚
    信缺失带来的危害。
                    

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    或者
    这种品质对于这个国家的发展而言是重要的因素，它的缺失会不可避免的给我们造成危害。
    或者
    毫无疑问，这种伟大的品质铸就了这个社会的支撑结构，如果这种宝贵的财富以任何一种方式被忽略，
    我们的社会都无法稳定发展。
    …第四句和最后一句…
    It is not hard to notice that without honesty/credibility, hardly can individuals or organizations make money,
    take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world, I argue.
    That will be a sorry state of affairs.
    我认为，不难发现，要是没有诚信，在这样一个竞争激烈的现代社会中，从长期来看个人和组织是很难
    赚到钱，赚到利润的，更不必说获得财富了。那将是一个遗憾的局面。
    或者:
    　　…第四句和最后一句…
    No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that the commitment to national and individual prosperity
    requires a prevailing and flourishing trend of this driving force. Put it another way, were there no credibility, we
    would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run.
    任何一个有识之士都会承认，如果要致力于国家富强和个人幸福，就需要诚信这种驱动力形成流行和
    繁荣之势。换句话讲，如果没有诚信，我们就不可能真正体会到真正的幸福和成功。这种品质是社会发展
    的基础，是我们不可能缺失的。
    　　或者
    Honesty and integrity, any perceptive observer would never hesitate to admit that, if become a general
    feature of the society, would contribute to both the well-being of individuals and a nation as a whole.
    任何一个有识之士都会承认，如果诚信成为这个世界的总体特征，那么将不仅对个人利益有帮助而且
    对整个国家也有好处。换句话讲促进人类社会往正确方向前进的力量，真诚的缺失会导致前进的列车出轨，
    会使得这个世界陷入一篇绝望的荒芜之中。
    3. Put another way, as a force propelling the human society forward in a virtuous direction, the
    absence of the it will even cause the train of progress run off track, leaving the world in a
    wilderness of desperation.
                    

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    第三段:(超级无敌结束段)
    Confronting with such an intimidating reality, we are expected to enhance the sharp awareness of
    consequently damaging effects of ignoring honesty. It is imperative that this negative/unfavorable/evil trend,
    constituting a permanent menace to harmonious society construction, be harnessed and curbed by the
    corresponding laws and regulations. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to
    witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost. (72字)
    面对如此可怕的现实，我们应该清醒的认识到因为忽视赫}n而带来的严重后果。对于不断危害到和谐
    社会建设的这样一种负面潮流，我们应该用相应的法律和法规对其加以限制和控制。只有在一个理性的，
    繁荣的，和健康的环境下我们才能见证一个理想的场景:人民能最大程度地享受他们的生活。
        话题：障德问题解决
        第三段表达
    The importance of such an apparent crisis in morality reflected by the drawing has been
    realized by the public and the government. This is a promising start. We have been under growing
    pressure to establish a social credit system nation wide in a bid to create an honest and faithful
    society. Adding to the effort mentioned above are other solutions, such as developing public service,
    promoting voluntary service and the like. With those accomplishments, people's sense of
    responsibility and the willingness to be candid and charitable will definitely be restored, I firmly
    believe.
                    

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    正面的展开:
    为评价一种好的社会现象。
    　　文化融合(Cultural integration)
        社会公德(public morals
    　　第二段的展开:
    …第一句:…
    The picture tells us that volunteer spiri is and remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing
    modern society.
    这幅图画告诉我们在如此快速发展的现代社会中，志愿者精神将一直是不可或缺的部分。
    …第二句:…
    1.It isl the modern virtues hat spark and fuel the sustained social progress and continuous betterment of
    culture when we are undergoing the ever most rapid economic growth. Volunteer spirit emerges as the most
    thriving one among them.
    当我们在经历着最快的经济增长的时候，正是一些现代社会的美德，引发和促进了持续的社会进步和
    不断的文化发展而志愿者精神正是其中最醒目的。
    或者
    2.这一人类品质是这个国家社会发展的重要部分，这种品质的缺失会给我们造成巨大的损失。
    或者
    3.这一伟大的品质铸就了我们社会的支撑结构，如果这种宝贵的品质以任何一种可能的方式被忽略，
    我们的社会都不能稳定发展。
    或者
    4.这一品质是促进我们社会发展的和提升我们整体生活水平的中坚力量。如果没有这一力量，我们进
    步的列车有可能会停止，甚至会出轨，使我们陷于一片绝望的荒芜中。
    或者
    4. Decades of nonstop economic development in China have led some people to worry about moral
    degradation in the newly rich society. However a set of virtue codes have steadfastly held the ground,
    bringing about ever responsible citizens of the society and nurturing the growth of culture at the same
    time. Volunteer spirit is surely one of the most prominent.
    儿十年不停滞的经济发展使得一些人很担心在当下繁荣社会中的道德缺失。但是一系列的道德规范稳
    住了局面，为这个社会塑造了有责任的公民，同时还培育了文化的增长。而志愿者精神就是其中最显著的。
                    

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    …第三句…
    People in the need can obtain financial aids, material support, mental comfort or spiritual back from
    volunteer's work.
    有需要的人能从志愿者的工作中获得经济上的帮助，物质上的支持，精神上的抚慰和精神
    …第四句…
    1.With the influence of this spirit, people who have benefited from other's good deeds will treat others with
    love, sincerity, sympathy, enthusiasm, hospitality or generosity.
    在这种精神的感召下，那些从善行中受益的人将会用爱，用真诚，用同情用热情好客和除慨来对待其
    他人。
    或者
    2.Being the beneficiary of a kind of volunteering deeds inspires us to act that way toward a third person and
    provides a huge boost to the sound evolution of a nation.
    受益于这种志愿者的行为，会使我们用这样的方法对待第三个人，这样就为国家的健康发展提供了巨
    大的促进。
    　　…最后一句…
    1.In other words, were there no volunteer spirit, we would never taste the civilization of the modern society.
    或者:
    2. Simply put, it inspires and boosts the sound evolution of our nation.
    简单讲，这种力量激发并促进了我们国家的健康发展。
   
                    

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    第三段的展开:
    版本一:
    Any thinking man would admit that our ardent love for life will further guarantee the prosperity of this
    life-affirming force which will usher a completely new horizon for the great renewal of our nation. In view of the
    importance of such a positive phenomenon, we must, doubtless, establish a coordinated mechanism to ensure its
    everlasting rewarding effects on our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we
    hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost(I argue.)(90字)
    任何一位有识之士都会承认，我们对于生活的深深的热爱，将会进一步确保这种生命正能量的繁荣，
    这种力量将会为我们民族的复兴开创一个全新的局面。正是考虑到这种正面现象的重要性，毫无疑问，我
    们将确立一个协调的机制来确保其作用于我们社会的持久的回报效果。只有在一个理性的，繁荣的和健康
    的环境中，我们才有可能见证到一个理想的场景，人们能最大化的享受他们的生活.
                    

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　　版本二:
    …第一句:…
    To make the world a better place, the positive momentum of this kind shall be made known and followed by
    people in every profession and in every corner.
    为了让这个世界变成更好的地方，这种正能量应该被这个社会每个行业，每个角落的人所知晓和遵守。
    …第二句:…
    It would not be a stretch to say that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this
    becomes a common practice that happens daily.
    不夸张的讲，如果这样的善行能成为每天都发生的行为，那么这个世界将变成一个有爱的大家庭。
    …第三句:…
    And once it takes root in the heart of every member of this society, the fruit will be the dazzling light that
    dispels darkness and creates harmony.
    一旦这种品质在每个社会成员的心中扎根，产生的果实将会是炫目的明灯，去除黑暗，创造和谐。
        梦想和目标的第三段:
    Taking this topic a step further, a nation must as well draw strength from a higher goal that all of its
    members share so that it can grow steadfastly and stably both in economic and in cultural terms. Above
    all, individuals and organizations alike all need a star, a goal, or better put a dream to navigate us in the
    great voyage of life.