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以下是中公考研小编为大家整理了2017年考研英语一大作文参考范文及解析,以供广大考生参考,希望对你们有所帮助。
参考范文
As is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy, lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and saying, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.
The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders.
Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.
真题解析
今年的英语一大作文题可以说完全在我们的预料之中,甚至比我们想象的要简单的多,据广大考生反映审题基本不存在问题。虽然考研图画作文,从来不给一个主题,但是对于考生来说,正确审出主题还是相对比较容易实现的。
值得关注的是,今年考题反映的是我们常说的那句话:理想很丰满,现实很骨感。如何跨越理想和现实的鸿沟,这是一个长久以来一直讨论的话题。这里完全可以结合考研真题中的个人品质类话题,谈一谈实现理想所需要的精神。那么此话题中很多表达方式,写作方式都与过去的真题如2007年的自信心缺乏、2012年的悲观与乐观等真题作文如出一辙。所以真题是最宝贵的复习资源!
我们简单来看看如何审这两副图,左边的图片中,一个学生坐在躺椅里悠哉悠哉,看着自己有许多书却没说读上哪怕一本;右边的图片中,一位勤奋的学生拿着一本书仔细读着,并且很现实地计划着一年争取读完20本书。图表描述参考如下:As is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy , lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and says, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.
第二段可以从两方面来论证,一方面强调如果只有想法而不行动是不利于理想的实现,另一方面从正面论证脚踏实地一步一步完成理想的道理。参考如下:The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders。.
第三段给出结论,简单提两条建议即可。比如:Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end,you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.
当然,考研写作判卷原则是:语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位。只要语言基本正确、结构比较清晰、内容与话题相关,均可取得及格分(12分)。如果语言精彩、结构严谨、论证充分,则可稳获高分(15分以上)。
总体来说,今年的大作文写作难度适中。虽然有些考生由于考场紧张、可能论述无逻辑,有些同学将关键词拼写错误。其实无需过于焦虑,阅卷教师主要考察整体语言水平,不会因为个别错误完全降为低分。只要语言基本正确、结构比较清晰,均可取得不错的成绩。
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