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2015年考研英语写作素材:常用引语和套句(4)

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      2015年考研英语写作素材:常用引语和套句(4)
    下面是几个不错的摸版:
    Recently there is a debate over whether …..Some people assert that.., while
other people believe that…As a matter of fact, the issue of whether ….. is a
complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to
their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there is not a universal answer to this
question, and whether one choice takes precedence over the other may quite
depend on the specific situation. The decision, nevertheless, is not an easy one
to make. Actually, the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As
far as I am concerned, however, I agree that …. , and do not agree that….. My
view can be greatly substantiated by the following discussions. The first
argument that can be presented to develop my position is that… A good example
may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance, it is obvious that….
    In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The
reason is not far to seek…. To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence, another
equally important aspect is that…. Admittedly, it may be true that …. in some
conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to
claim that ….,Actually, these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and
too weak to strengthen the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x
and y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that… To
sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each
other to generate an integrate whole and thus become more convincing than any
single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that …., because….
    In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion, the
author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that… Further more, he
also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be
somehow appealing, while a close examination will reveal how groundless it is.
We do not have to look very far to see the invalidity of this argument. This
argument is problematic for the following reasons.
    In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that ….
The author unfairly assumes that…. However, the assumption is questionablem
because the author provides no evidence to support this argument. The arguer
fails to take into account other facts that might contribute to the result that
…….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is also likely that ………………………… Any of these
scenarios, if true, would show that…………………..
    Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such
possibility. In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after
this and therefore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be cited
as evidence to support the assumption that there is a causal-effect relationship
between A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be statistically correlated
with A does not necessarily mean that A is the cause of B. In fact, the author
has obviously neglected the possibility of other alternative facts such as…, or
… may contribute to a certain extent to B. It may be only a coincidence that ……
. Unless the author can rule out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in
question can not be accepted.
    In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient
to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient to
establish a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is
representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.
    In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any
conclusion at all.
    In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy
fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all
respects, and the author assumes without justification that all things are
equal, and that the background conditions have remained the same at different
times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee that this is
the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support this assumption.
Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that … is entirely unfounded. In fact,
it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn from B are applicable to A.
Differences between A and B clearly out weight the similarities, thus making the
analogy highly less than valid. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is
likely much more difficult for B to do....
    In addition, the conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the
validity of the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is too
vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how and by whom
the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample size, or how
the samples are selected. Until these questions are answered the results are
worthless as evidence to support that….Besides, the author assumes that A and B
are mutually exclusive alternatives. However, the author has never offered any
reasons or evidences for imposing an either/or choice. Common sense and
observation tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the
analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To make the
argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would have to provide more
information that………………. The arguer should also demonstrate that……………….to make
this argument logically acceptable. Since the author commits the above mentioned
logical mistakes and fails to consider the whole situation comprehensively, his
ideas should not be adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he….
    In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because
the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the
arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us that…. In
addition, the arguer could have to provide more precise information to support
his claim.
    It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number
of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products, careless
product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee expense monitoring,
ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other wasteful spending
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