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图表开头描述：
1. According to the table, the 文章主题 increased from 数字 in 年份 to 数字 in 年份. Although this was a
small increase, the way in which 修饰 changed greatly.
2. Since 年代, China has witnessed a great change in 主题. As the graph shows, the percentage of 主题词 1
decreased considerably, dropping from 数字 in 年代 to 数字 in 年代, while the corresponding figures for 主
题词 2 increased dramatically, rising from 数字 to 数字 over the same period.
3. As can be seen from the above graph, money value of annual global electronic commerce transactions is
increasing gradually in the past nine years. In 2002, the money value of global electronic commerce transactions is
almost $ 4 billion, while the number reaches $ 360 billion in 2011, 90 times that of 2002.
4. It can be seen from the pie chart that…
… accounts for the largest proportion.
主题词 makes up 百分比 of …
百分比 represents 主题词
百分比 is defined as 主题词
5. Isolated as the figures seem to exist, as a matter of fact, they are connected with one another closely.
Psychological problem is most prevalent among the 14-16 and 17 to 19 age groups, with 40% and 60% up of them claimed to have been troubled by it respectively.
This graph shows percentage of college students taking part-time job across different years: more than two thirds of freshmen admit to have been actively employed by paid jobs and a slightly increase is witnessed among sophomores and juniors, while the percentage rise to 88.24% among the seniors.
电子商务发展的原因：
第一段：
As is shown above, China’s online shoppers reached 210 million by the end of June. The country is expected
to become the world largest online retail market next year, overtaking Japan.
第二段：
After my exploration of this graph and consideration of some related facts, I would like to present the
following reasons. Firstly, according to a survey, China’s Internet population reached 538 million, and it is the
number that ushers a great possibility of the online shopping’s boom. Secondly, E-commerce companies are
paying increasing attention to technology development and innovation to attract more online shoppers. Consistent
with the improvement of technology is investment banks cheering it on, with more money poured into the market
facilitating sales promotion.
第三段
Impressive as the numbers are, there’s another set of statistics that’s even more striking: nearly one-third of
the online shoppers in China fell prey to fraudulent websites during that period. Protection needs to be in place for
everyone, starting with consumers, if China’s E-commerce industry is to grow as it can and should. |
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发表于 2017-8-6 15:48:28