考研英语小作文批改：道歉信8-10分例文1

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考研英语待批改作文：
0-4分
    第一篇
　　Dear David,
    I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
    The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.
    Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear David,
    I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
    The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could（删除） send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check（用词不当） the record and send my feedback to you.
    Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    8分
    同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的"主将从现"。