考研英语小作文批改：道歉信8-10分例文2

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考研英语待批改作文：
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    Dear Prof.Wong,
    I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.
    To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
    I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    LiMing

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Prof.Wong,
    I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to（删除） complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has （删除）prevented me from any activity.
    To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
    I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    LiMing
    8分
    同学你好，作文写的很好，但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事，因此要用过去时。