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英语复习资料：作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理。
考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I just read an advertisement in yesterday's China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.
I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlor's degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I just read an advertisement in yesterday's China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.
I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified（改为high-qualified） individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlor's(改为bachelor) degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好，标点符号与后面的单词空一格。要注意控制字数，考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。作文基本没有什么问题。
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发表于 2017-8-6 15:45:52