考研英语小作文批改：邀请信8-10分例文1

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考研英语待批改作文：
8-10分
    第一篇
　　Dear Dr.Wang,
    There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
    The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
    I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Dr.Wang,
    There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
    The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
    I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    9分
    同学你好，作文写的很好 ，没有语法错误，但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。