考研英语小作文批改：道歉信5-7分例文1

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考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
    第一篇
    Dear Ada,
    I am truly sorry that I fail to retune the book to you on time.
    The reason is that I have lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
    The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept
    my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Ada,
    I am truly sorry that I fail(加ed) to retune(拼写错误，改为return) the book to you on time.
    The reason is(改为was) that I have(删除) lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
    The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely（加逗号）
    Li Ming
    6分
    同学你好，注意小作文的写作格式。你所道歉的事发生在过去，因此全篇要用过去时。