考研英语小作文批改：求职信0-4分例文1

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    第一篇
    Dear Sir or Madam ,
    I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .
    I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as senior middle school. .
    I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
　　Dear Sir or Madam ,
    I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as (加a)Chinese teacher .
    I understand what should be instruction study of children (不能理解你的意思).My proficiency of（改为proficient） skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature（这里填专业名称）.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as（serve as 后面加职位名称） senior middle school. .
    I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming
    4分
    同学你好，标点符号与后面的单词要空一格。你需要提高英语的表达能力，另外，你对模版也不熟悉，建议你多看一些英语作文，熟悉一下这类作文的写作思路。