考研英语小作文批改：道歉信5-7分例文2

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考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
    第二篇
    Dear Mr.Li，
    I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.
    The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Mr.Li，
    I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.
    The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I（改为I could） study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    7分
    同学你好，你的作文思路不错，宾语从句是正常语序。