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第一篇
Dear Sir or Madam ，
I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didn't work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.
I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam ，
I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didn't work after I used it once, which I make(改为am) sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.
I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
9分
作文写的很好，再注意一下小的细节
第二篇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy（拼写错误，改为daily） life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously(拼写错误，改为continuously). Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
8分
考研小作文的字数要求是100词，不要超过太多，考试时间很紧张，把过多的时间用在写小作文上是不合理的。作文写的不错，但要再细心一点，尽量避免单词拼写错误。
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发表于 2017-8-6 15:45:49