考研英语小作文批改：道歉信0-4分例文2

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    Dear Nero，
    I am truly sorry that I broke an appointment.
    You were agreed that we will have dinner together tonight , but I receiced an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience . If it were not for , we would have a wonderful memory . You told me you have time every Sunday , let's set an appointment on next Sunday evening.
    Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
　　Dear Nero，
    I am truly sorry that I broke an（改为the） appointment.
    You were agreed(改为agreed)that we will have dinner together tonight, but I receiced（拼写错误，改为received） an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience(不符合英语表达习惯). If it were not for（改为If I hadn't left） , we would have a wonderful memory(改为time ). You told me you have time(are free) every Sunday , (加so)let's set an appointment on next Sunday evening.
    Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming
    4分
    同学你好，注意定冠词和不定冠词的使用情景。建议你再复习一下虚拟语气的表达方式。另外，你需要多读一些英语的小文章，培养英文的思维习惯。