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As is vividly shown in the picture, two tourists are enjoying their peaceful world while not far away from them, the lake is burdened with so much noise--people's leftovers are fighting with other. That plastic containers, fish-bones, banana peel, tins, food wrapping and so on flow on the water. We can describe this scene with the saying below the picture " after the travel".
The subtal portrail by the painter wants to convey such a message: the tourism has harmed our environment. For one thing, as the further develop of our economy and more changes in our lifestyle, tourism, as an engine of the economy, is booming everywhere. God-knows-how-much visitors take sightseeing everyday. Discarding the signs "please don't litter casually", they leave their rubbish any place. Though there are cleaners, they couldn't manage to pickup various kind of leftovers. Just as the housewife who does physical-taking households everyday, but there is some place she could not reaching. For another, actually tourism is not bad within limitation. Unfortunately, under the exertion of interest, some local government and businessmen exploit our travel resources over excessively over, which decrease the condition of our environment. There are so many places which possess little characteristics: water, mountain and temple are created by people.
Undoubtedly, tourism makes great contribution to the public development. However, the significant point is that ecology system has been disturbed. People should not get what they want in the sacrifice of the nature.
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
As is vividly shown in the picture, two tourists are enjoying their peaceful world while not far away from them, the lake is burdened with so much noise（这个词是噪音的意思）--people's leftovers are fighting with（加each） other. That plastic containers, fish-bones, banana peel, tins, food wrapping and so on flow on the water.（这句话没有谓语动词） We can describe this scene with the saying below the picture " after the travel".
The subtal portrail by the painter wants to convey such a message: the tourism has harmed our environment. For one thing, as the further develop of our economy and more changes in our lifestyle, tourism, as an engine of the economy, is booming everywhere. God-knows-how-much visitors take sightseeing everyday. Discarding the signs "please don't litter casually", they leave their rubbish any place. Though there are cleaners, they couldn't manage to pickup various kind of leftovers. Just as the housewife who does physical-taking households everyday, but there is some place she could not reaching. For another, actually tourism is not bad within limitation. Unfortunately, under the exertion of interest, some local government and businessmen exploit our travel resources over excessively over, which decrease the condition of our environment. There are so many places which possess little characteristics: water, mountain and temple are created by people.（与文章有没有太大关系）
Undoubtedly, tourism makes great contribution to the public development. However, the significant point is that ecology system has been disturbed. People should not get what they want in the sacrifice of the nature.（大部分内容第二段已经说过了）点评：11分第一段对图片描写不完整。最后一段应该写一些措施。不要超出字数太多。