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As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly that with the  enjoyable journey in a beautiful scenic spot, the little girl and the  little boy on a small boat throw the rubbish into the clear water  intentionally. The lake have already been full of floating garbage, such  as banana skin, fish-bones .It is ironically the Chinese characters  below the picture captions that “after the travel”.
     The purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention  should to be paid to the lack of sense of responsibility concerning  environment protection. Owing to rapidly economic development, the  number of people who would like to travel around obviously roared  .Although prosperity of tourism, the quality of tourists is not in the  company with the present situation. Many environmental degradation  confront us with serious issues, like the phenomenon of river pollution  and white pollution which may bring devastating disaster to human beings  if we let the situation above the picture go as it is. We do not know  where our comfortable life atmosphere in the future.
Therefore , it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For  one thing , we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to  punish those who pollute the nature. For another we should enhance the  awareness of people that economic unsustainable should be taken into  consideration as profound development of human existence.
   考研英语作文批改点评如下：
  As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly that with the enjoyable  journey in a beautiful scenic spot, the little girl and the little boy  on a small boat throw the rubbish into the clear water intentionally（这个词是“有意思、故意的”的意思）.  The lake have already been full of floating garbage, such as banana  skin, fish-bones .It is ironically the Chinese characters below the  picture captions that “after the travel”.  The purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention should to（去掉） be  paid to the lack of sense of responsibility concerning environment  protection. Owing to rapidly economic development, the number of people  who would like to travel around obviously roared（为什么要用过去时呢？） .Although（用despite of） prosperity of tourism, the quality of tourists is not in the company with the present situation. Many（应该用much）  environmental degradation confront us with serious issues, like the  phenomenon of river pollution and white pollution which may bring  devastating disaster to human beings if we let the situation above the  picture go as it is. We do not know where our comfortable life  atmosphere in the future.
Therefore , it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For  one thing , we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to  punish those who pollute the nature. For another we should enhance the  awareness of people that economic unsustainable should be taken into  consideration as profound development of human existence.点评：16分第二段的内容适当简化一些。注意细节。