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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
     I am writing to apologize for having  disturbed your life when I perform on the violin last week.I was in  such a hurry that I was busy with my music program without concerning  the life our neighbourhoods in our community. Had I paid more attention  then,I would not have made such a bad influence. Now something must to  be done to solve the problem because I have a awareness that breaking  the society of harmonious. I can either on the outdoor for playing or in  your time of on duty,If you do not mind,May I invite you to talk over  this thing. Please let me konw which solution you perfer at your  convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
      Yours sincerely,
      Li Ming
   考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,   I am writing to apologize for having disturbed your life when I perform（应该用过去时）  on the violin last week. I was in such a hurry that I was busy with my  music program without concerning the life our neighbourhoods in our  community. Had I paid more attention then, I would not have made such a  bad influence. Now something must to（去掉） be done to solve the problem because I 【have a（an） awareness that breaking the society of harmonious】（这句话的意思不对，应该是感到不安）.  I can either on the outdoor for playing or in your time of on duty, If  you do not mind, May I invite you to talk over this thing. Please let me  konw（拼写错误） which solution you perfer（拼写错误） at your convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：6分要分三段。注意拼写和细节。