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As is subtly portrayed in the drawing , two visitors are going sightseeing on a small boat ,throwing their picnicing leftovers casually into s lake .Nevertheless,the lake is fulling with flowing rubbish such as plastic bags , tins , fish-bones , bottles , banana skin and so on. And blew the cartoon , there isa sign which says :" after" the travel. The purpose of this protrayal is to show us that s great deal ofscenic spots are polluted in that tourists creating and leaving God-konws-how-much rubbish. Owing to extremly polluting , the beauty of narure have been suffered a great destruction . If we left this situation go as it is , tourism may exert greatly implication on environment we are living in : ecological system is disturbed and natural resources will be excessively used .
     Even though , tourism does in a largepart help to stimulate the economy of several cities, but its consequences are unquestioned . Therefore , we should enhance the awareness of people that the environment are vital to us . Also I assume that we humans can overcome this difficulty , and we will have a brighter furture .
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：

As is subtly portrayed in the drawing , two visitors are going sightseeing on a small boat ,throwing their picnicing（拼写错误）leftovers casually into s lake .Nevertheless, the lake is fulling（拼写错误） with flowing rubbish such as plastic bags , tins , fish-bones , bottles , banana skin and so on. And blew the cartoon, there isa sign which says:" after" the travel. The purpose of this protrayal（拼写错误） is to show us that s（a） great deal ofscenic spots are polluted in that（这里是什么用法？） tourists creating and leaving God-konws（拼写错误）-how-much rubbish. Owing to extremly（拼写错误） polluting, the beauty ofnarure（拼写错误） have been suffered a great destruction. If we left（用现在时） this situation go as it is, tourism may exert greatly implication on environment we are living in: ecological system is disturbed and natural resources will be excessively used. Even though, tourism does in a largepart help to stimulate the economy of several cities, but its consequences are unquestioned. Therefore, we should enhance the awareness of people that the environment are（应该用is） vital to us. Also I assume that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter furture（拼写错误）.点评：15分应该是看过范文的同学，整体思路是对的，拼写错误太多，注意细节。