考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(626)

考研网

考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
As is vividly depicted in the picture above, two tourists are travelling with about（这里是什么意思）in the lake, and one of them are littering. Unfortunately, there are various kinds of garbage are floating on the lake, such as the（去掉，这里不用定指） died fish, the（同上） plastic boxes, the（同上） banana peel, the（同上）wasted bottles. The caption indicates that the journey of more than.（这里要表达什么意思？） As is vividly depicted in the picture above, two tourists are travelling with about in the lake, and one of them are littering. Unfortunately, there are various kinds of garbage are floating on the lake, such as the died fish, the plastic boxes, the banana peel, the wasted bottles. The caption indicates that the journey of more than.  The purpose of this to show us that due attention has to be paid to the environmental protection of travelling. In recently years, with the social and economic rapidly development, the number of tourists has sharply increased, and some of them have no idea of protecting the beautiful landscape. At the same time, the beautiful scenery has suffered a great destruction. If we let this situation go as it is, we do not know where our beautiful scenery will be in the future.
     Therefore, it is imperative for us to take several practical measures. First one thing, our authorities should make strict law to fine the littering people. For another thing, we should enhance the awareness of people that protection the environment is everyone’s responsibility. Only in this way can we protect our beautiful scenery and we will have a brilliant future.
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：

   
The purpose of this（加is） to show us that due attention has to be paid to the environmental protection of travelling. In recently years, with the social and economic rapidly development, the number of tourists has sharply increased, and some of them have no idea of protecting the beautiful landscape. At the same time, the beautiful scenery has suffered a great destruction. If we let this situation go as it is, we do not know where our beautiful scenery will be in the future. Therefore, it is imperative for us to take several practical measures. First one thing, our authorities should make strict law（用复数）to fine the littering people. For another thing, we should enhance the awareness of people that protection（应该用动名词）the environment is everyone’s responsibility. Only in this way can we protect our beautiful scenery and we will have a brilliant future. 点评：15-16分结构和思路上没什么问题，但是错误比较多，尤其是第一段，要注意细节和你的表达。