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考研英语待批改作文：
In the new millennium, traveling is became a essential station of individual’s life. A good landscape does well in both mental and physical for people. But the pollutions of the environment are simultaneous coming, just as the cartoon. A boatman is taking forward of the boat which two visitors sat in. The traveler is laughing, taking photos also eating, and the nut’s peels are thrown in the river. So the “footprint” of them is constituted by fish bones, empty bottles, watermelon peels, plastic lunch boxes and else.
    Undoubtedly, the cartoon is vividly described a phenomenon of someone whom self-seeking and won’t care about the nature. Protect the environment is a duty of everybody. As the picture, the pollution of the scene not only a pity for other visitors, but also does harm for the ecology. Ecology is the circle of air, water and soil. One of them be destructed, the other may worse, and then people may get disease.
    In my opinion, we must protect the environment of the earth, the family of each person. Not only keep the landscape cleaning can we do, but also something around us. Like we can use the each side of papers, and don’t drive the car everyday, don’t use the chopsticks only once, don’t use the plastic bags and so on. If we do like this, the world will be better.
考研英语作文批改点评如下：

    In the new millennium, traveling is became（用完成时has become） a（用an）essential station of individual’s life. A good landscape does well in both mental and physical for people. But the pollutions of the environment are simultaneous coming, just as the cartoon. A boatman is taking forward of the boat which two visitors sat in. The traveler is laughing, taking photos also eating, and the nut’s peels are thrown in（用介词into）the river. So the “footprint” of them is constituted by fish bones, empty bottles, watermelon peels, plastic lunch boxes and else.
Undoubtedly, the cartoon is vividly described a phenomenon of someone whom（作主语，应该用who） self-seeking and won’t care about the nature. Protect（应该用动名词形式）the environment is a duty of everybody. As the picture, the pollution of the scene not only a pity for other visitors, but also does harm for the ecology. Ecology is the circle of air, water and soil. One of them be destructed, the other may worse, and then people may get disease.（第二短写图片揭示的内容，如果与内容没有很大的相关性，就不要写了）In my opinion, we must protect the environment of the earth, the family of each person. Not only keep the landscape cleaning can we do, but also something around us. Like we can use the each side of papers, and don’t drive the car everyday, don’t use the chopsticks only once, don’t use the plastic bags and so on. If we do like this, the world will be better.点评：12分要严格按照题目中每段的要求写作文。