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From this picture I found that young couple is very happy on the boat and enjoy the beautiful scenery ,and that they pay no attention to the environment.there are all over the fishbone ,empty plastic bottle ,banana peels and plastic dinner box and so on.moreover the female guest throw the rubbish to the lake at her conveniently.
With the rapid social and economic development, many of the local government and even human beings also pay attention to the rate of economic increasing excessive and ignore to protect our globe that gave us abundant resources and beautiful circumstance .our living standard become better and better .we have much time and spend much money to take a trip to anywhere what i want at will,but at same time we also focus the surroundings and learn more about knowledge of how to protect the environment ,such as we use the plastic bag anymore,learn about how to classify the rubbish ,get rid of the habit of throw the rubbish random at any note-able sight.
Even as describe from this picture ,our living condition and even our beautiful earth is suffer from the pollution from human beings,environmental protection is more and more necessary and important thing for us .Let's acting and to contribute a power for this career!
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
From this picture I found that young couple is very happy on the boat and enjoy（用第三人称单数形式） the beautiful scenery, and that they pay no attention to the environment. there（首字母大写）are all over the fishbone（用复数）, empty plastic bottle（用复数）,banana peels and plastic dinner box（用复数）and so on. moreover（首字母大写） the female guest throw the rubbish to（用介词into） the lake at her conveniently（这里应该用名词）.  With the rapid social and economic development, many of the local government and even human beings also pay attention to the rate of economic increasing excessive and ignore to protect our globe that gave（应该用第三人称单数gives）us abundant resources and beautiful circumstance .our（首字母大写） living standard become（应该用第三人称单数）better and better .we（首字母大写）have much time and spend much money to take a trip to anywhere what i want at will（改成we want）, but at（加定冠词the） same time we also focus the surroundings and learn more about knowledge of how to protect the environment ,such as we use（根据你的意思，应该是don’t use） the plastic bag anymore, learn about how to classify the rubbish ,（加连词and）get rid of the habit of throw the rubbish random at any note-able sight.  Even as describe from this picture ,our living condition and even our beautiful earth is suffer（现在进行时，用-ing形式）from the pollution from human beings, environmental protection is（加不定冠词a）more and more necessary and important thing for us .Let's acting（用动词原形） and to（去掉） contribute a power for this career!点评：8分没有严格按照题目要修写，第二段要写这幅图欲表达的内容。下笔前要分析清楚题目要求。