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As is shown in the picture, a boat with tourists is surrounded by a variety of luggage. However, instead of taking care of the river, the visitors are throwing a bottle in it.
     These years have seen a boom in the tourist economy which is supposed to show the development of our lives. It is a pity that as people from all over the country tend to go some beautiful places, the scenes are becoming worse and worse. How could it happen? The picture gives us a vivid answer. Firstly, the tourists are leaving the rubbish everywhere they want. Secondly, only caring about earning money, the local people just ignore the improper behavior. Thirdly, large amount of people pouring in a limited space may produce more dirty things than the local rubbish managing system can deal with.
     It is known by everyone today that the environment is of virtual importance for a long-term development, either for the economy or for us humans. There are some movements we can take to improve this situation. We can advocate a campaign over the country to encourage people keep the places they visited clean and clear. Also those who have done wrong should be punished.
   
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
As is shown in the picture, a boat with tourists is surrounded by a variety of luggage（这个词是行李的意思）. However, instead of taking care of the river, the visitors are throwing a bottle in it. （对图片中的描述不完整） These years have seen a boom in the tourist economy which is supposed to show the development of our lives. It is a pity that as people from all over the country tend to go some beautiful places, the scenes are becoming worse and worse. How could it happen? The picture gives us a vivid answer. Firstly, the tourists are leaving the rubbish everywhere they want. Secondly, only caring about earning money, the local people just ignore the improper behavior（这里应该用倒装）. 【Thirdly, large amount of people pouring in a limited space may produce more dirty things（肮脏的事？） than the local rubbish managing system can deal with. 】（不知道这一点想要说明什么） It is known by everyone today that the environment is of virtual importance for a long-term development, either for the economy or for us humans（应该用both and）. There are some movements we can take to improve this situation. We can advocate a campaign over the country to encourage people keep the places they visited clean and clear. Also those who have done wrong should be punished.点评：16分主要问题是第一段中对图片的描述不够完整。