考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(533)

考研网

考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,I am writingthe letter tomake an apologyto you for I forgot to returnthe book which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from our schooland found it in my bag. I am so sorry that you cannotlook to it at present. Owing to I muststay at home for two month I do not return the book to you for the time being ,so how aboutyou buy a same book and I will pay for it ? Perhaps I would send it back to you throughthe post office. And you have any other solutionsinform me. I am sorry for my carelessness.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or madam, As（去掉as，否则这不是一句完整的话） I am（去掉）want to agency（这是个名词，这里要用一个动词）propolis（拼写错误） product and fresh royal jelly by your enterprise product with due consideration of the good reputation of your enterprise and the high quality of your product. I am writing to askacting on specific conditions. Firstly, plese（拼写错误） give me particular accounts as product name, product standard, product price, （改成句号） Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service,（改成句号） Thirdly, I wonderwhat（改成in which） way（加不定式to） deliver these product?（这是个陈述句，用句号） Furthly（拼写错误）, howmuch money for agency（这是个名词，后面不能加宾语） your enterprise product. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,LiMing点评：5分模板内容用的太多，但是错误也很多。