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Dear Jasmine,
     I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return the key of your bicycle . Yesterday, I came home and I found it in my wallet . I am so sorry that you cannot use it at present .
     The key I borrow from you is only one , so I believe you can try to unlock . How about changing the lock of your bicycle in repair room and I will pay for it? If you do not like this , you can borrow Lisa's bicycle , I would back three days later . If there are any other solutions that you like , please let me know.
    I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely
    LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Jasmine（题目中给的是Bob）,  I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return the key of your bicycle. Yesterday, I came home and I found it in my wallet. I am so sorry that you cannot use it at present.  The key I borrow from you is（加定冠词the） only one, so I believe you can try to unlock（加宾语it） . How about changing the lock of your bicycle in repair room and I will pay for it? If you do not like this, you can borrow Lisa's bicycle ,（加连词and） I would back three days later . If there are any other solutions that you like, please let me know. I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely （加逗号）LiMing点评：6-7分注意控制字数。要看清题目，不要在格式上丢分。