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We can see from the picture that a couple of the tourists ina boat where many of the garbages behind their.The rabbish such as plastic、box、bottles ,were left by the peoples who have been came for tour.
      The picture is really thought-provoking.I think there are many reasons resposible for the phenomenon.Firstly,many people are lack of the conscious of protecting our environment.They are addicting their enjoyment when they are appreciating the prospect.Secondly,the executive department are not aware of the importance of the management and advocation.
     Therefore we shoule take some smeasures to prevent the pollution behavior and protect our enviroment .On the one hand,our government shoule promote the management and education.On the other hand,we should enhance our realiszation to protect our globe which is the only place for existing.All in all, only in this way our society can become more beautiful.
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
【We can see from the picture that a couple of the（去掉）tourists in the coat where many of the garbage behind their.】（这个句子的语法结构不对）The rabbish（拼写错误） such as plastic、（英语中用逗号）box、（改成and）bottles ,were left by the peoples（改成people） who have been came（去掉，前面有been了）for tour. The picture is really thought-provoking. I think there are many reasons resposible（拼写错误） for the phenomenon. Firstly, many people are lack of the conscious of protecting our environment. They are addicting their enjoyment when they are appreciating the prospect. Secondly, the executive department are（保持单复数一致） not aware of the importance of the management and advocation（拼写错误）. Therefore we shoule（拼写错误） take some smeasures（拼写错误） to prevent the pollution behavior and protect our enviroment（拼写错误）.On the one hand, our government shoule（拼写错误）promote the management and education. On the other hand, we should enhance our realiszation（拼写错误）to protect our globe which is the only place for existing. All in all, only in this way our society can become more beautiful. 点评：6分考研英语大作文160-200词，你的作文字数不够。另外没有把握好题目，这篇作文是写旅游景点的保护，后半部分跑题了。拼写错误比较多。