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Dear Bob,
     I amwriting this letter to apologize that I couldn't spend thevacation with you.I regret that I couldn't go on a trip,which weall haveexpected for a long time,together with you.
     I am just informed that I have to go to Beijing the day after tomorrowon business.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.I assure that I must go on holiday with you next term.What's more,I will bringgift to you from Beijing.
    Once again,I am so sorry for any inconveniece you have sustained.Wish you enjoy your holiday!
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I amwriting this letter to apologizethat I couldn't spend thevacation with you. I regret that I couldn't go on a trip, which weall haveexpected for a long time, together with you. I am just informed that I have to go to Beijing the day after tomorrowon business. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies. I assure that I must go onholiday with you next term. What's more, I will bring（加不定冠词a）gift to you from Beijing.Once again, I am so sorry for any inconveniece（拼写错误） you have sustained. Wish you enjoy your holiday!Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：8分写的不错，再细心一点，争取满分。