考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(484)

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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
    【第一段】 I am writing this letter to give you my apologies for damaging the light of your car.
    【第二段】This morning I drove to the airport in a hurry and damaged the light of your car in no intention. Because I went in a hurry to catch the plane, so I left the note. This is my phone number in that city: 1234567890. I will come back three days later. Please call me when you see this message. If you have repaired , please give me the invoice. I would compensate all the costs of the repair，or ,you can wait for my back, I will repair it.
    【第三段】Please allow me to say sorry again.
    【落款】Yours sincerely,
    LiMing【分两行位于右下角】
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob
:（英语中用逗号）I am writing this letter to give you my apologies for damaging the light of your car. This morning I drove to the airport in a hurry and damaged the light of your car in no intention. Because I went in a hurry to catch the plane, so I left the note. This is my phone number in that city: 1234567890. I will come back three days later. Please call me when you see this message. If you have repaired, please give me the invoice. I would compensate all the costs of the repair，or ,you can wait for my back, I will repair it. Please allow me to say sorry again. 【落款】Yours sincerely, LiMing【分两行，位于右下角】点评：8分最后一段过于简短，建议再加一句话。