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Dear Bob:
     I am writting this letter for purpose of apologizing for having been late for such a essential meeting yesterday.I was so careless that i did not take the traffick jam into consideration.Hard i thought about it more carefully i would not had been late for this extremly significant meeting which represent our newly speech.
     Now i am extrodinary sorry for having made this happen and i wonder wehther i could do something to make the situation become any better.Dose my public apologizing in need or will you do me a favor to make a represent once again?Plase tell me you thought and i am willing ti do anything to make up the stupid mistake.
     Please acceptmy faithfully apologise.Further,it would be my honour if you can givem me a chance to offset this mistake.
    yours sincerely
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob:（英语中用逗号） I am writing（拼写错误） this letter for（用介词in）purpose of apologizing for having been late for such a（an）essential meeting yesterday. I was so careless that i did not take the traffick （拼写错误）jam into consideration. Hard（had）i thought about it more carefully i would not had（应该用原形）been late for this extremly（拼写错误） significant meeting which represent our newly speech.  Now i am extrodinary（拼写错误） sorry for having made this happen and i wonder wehther（拼写错误） i could do something to make the situation become any better. Dose my public apologizing in need or will you do me a favor to make a represent once again? Plase（拼写错误） tell me you（用your）thought and i am willing ti（to）do anything to make up the stupid mistake.  Please accept my faithfully apologise（拼写错误）. Further, it would be my honour if you can givem（拼写错误） me a chance to offset this mistake. yours（Yours）sincerely（加逗号）Li Ming点评：5-6分错误太多了，字数超出的也比较多。I要大写。