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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to appologize that I forgot to returned the book I borrowed from you.WhenI got home,I found to my suprise that the book is in my baggage for my carelessness.
     I am so sorry that you can not read it immediately.How about buying another one and I will pay for it?If you just want this one,I will send the book to you by Express Mail Service.You can call me when you have other solutions.
     Once again,please accept my sincere apology for any inconveniences that I have caused.Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to appologize（拼写错误） that I forgot to returned the book I borrowed from you. WhenI got home, I found to my suprise（拼写错误） that the book is（应该用过去时was） in my baggage for my carelessness. I am so sorry that you can not read it immediately. How about buying another one and I will pay for it? If you just want this one, I will send the book to you by Express Mail Service. You can call me when you have other solutions. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconveniences that I have caused. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分第一段尽量不要出错，模板的痕迹有点明显，导致整体上链接不是很流畅。