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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:43 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,
     I'm writing to apologize that I cannot meet you at the airport on time.Therewill bea meeting in my company at 8 am on Sunday morningwhich willlast 3 hours,everyone should be present, so I cannot arrive airport at 10:30 am.I will go to the airport as soon as I can ,and please wait for me in the arrival lounge.
     It has been 3 years since we wrote to each other,however we have not seen each other. I will wear white shirt,black trouses that day.My telephone number is 111111,thus you can call the number if you couldn't identify me.
     I hope you will accept my apology and I'm looking forward to our first meeting.
    yours sincerely,
    LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob, I'm writing to apologize that I cannot meet you at the airport on time.Therewill bea meeting in my company at 8 am on Sunday morningwhich willlast 3 hours,everyone should be present, so I cannot arrive airport at 10:30 am. I will go to the airport as soon as I can , and please wait for me in the arrival lounge. It has been 3 years since we wrote to each other, however we have not seen each other. I will wear(加介词in) white shirt, (改成and)black trouses(拼写错误)that day. My telephone number is 111111, thus you can call the number if you couldn't identify me. I hope you will accept my apology and I'm looking forward to our first meeting.yours(Yours) sincerely,
LiMing点评:8分写的很不错,还需要多一点的细心。
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