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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing here to make an apology that I cannot come to your birthday party which will be held on Saturday evening.
     Since I am preparing for the entrance exam for graduate school, I am going to take a lesson on the same day. So it’s really a pity that I can’t participate in your birthday party. I hope you have a good time and enjoy your 21-birthday. I will send the present to your by this week. I am sure you like it.
     Happy Birthday in advance and best Wishes for you!
    Yours,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing here to make an apology that I cannot come to your birthday party which will be held on Saturday evening. Since I am preparing for the entrance exam for graduate school, I am going to take a lesson on the same day. So it’s really a pity that I can’t participate in your birthday party. I hope you have a good time and enjoy your 21-birthday. I will send the present to your（应该用宾格you） by this week. I am sure you（建议加will） like it. Happy Birthday in advance and best Wishes for you!Yours,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7分写的还可以，不要在格式上丢分。