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Dear Sir,
     I am writing the letter to apologise for my inconsideration that I blame to you with unacceptable words and I writed a blog to reveal your high private incoming which did not match to your present work.
     I realised that it has taken some trouble to you and my works is unforbid by law that I sign-up your real name and persenality information.I have already deleted this blog and apologise on my own space.
     I am sorry for any inconvenient it may leave to you after the staff. Please accept my sicerely aplogise again.
    Yours truly
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir（题目中要求是Bob）, I am writing the letter to apologise for my inconsideration that I blame to（去掉，blame可以做及物动词） you with unacceptable words and I writed（wrote） a blog to reveal your high private incoming which did not match to your present work. I realised that it has taken some trouble to you and my works（著作？） is unforbid（应该用forbidden）by law that I sign-up your real name and persenality（拼写错误） information. I have already deleted this blog and apologise（应该用过去时） on my own space. I am sorry for any inconvenient（应该用名词形式） it may leave to you after the staff. Please accept my sicerely aplogise（sincere apology） again. Yours truly（加逗号）Li Ming点评：5分错误比较多，要加强语法知识，注意细节。