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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I'am writing to say sorry for I have lost the notebook which you borrowed me to copy. I feel terribly sorry for what I have done .
    Yesterday I left it on the table when I departedfrom library. I went back to find it when I realized it .But it was notthere and Icouldn't find it anywhere. Had I paid more attention ,I wouldn't have made such a mistake. I will copy a same one for you as soon as possible, and send it to your home tomorrow.
    Please allow me tosay sorry again .I do hope you can accept my cordial apology and give me a chance to remedy you.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I'am（I’m） writing to say sorry for I have lost the notebook which you borrowed（应该是lent to）me to copy. I feel terribly sorry for what I have done. Yesterday I left it on the table when I departedfrom library. I went back to find it when I realized it（it指代不明）.But it was notthere and Icouldn't find it anywhere. Had I paid more attention, I wouldn't have made such a mistake. I will copy a same one for you as soon as possible, and send it to your home tomorrow.Please allow me tosay sorry again .I do hope you can accept my cordial apology and give me a chance to remedy（这个词用在这里不合适） you. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的中规中矩，注意细节。建议读一下范文。