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考研英语待批改作文：

道歉信：
    Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party. However, it is really nice of you to think of me for such a pleasant occasion.
The reason why I can’t take part to your party is that one of my overseas friends will come to visit me. It is quite out of my expectation, and it conflicts with your party. Though I myself like to attend your party very much, I expect to stay with her. After all, she will stay here only one day. Thinking that it is easier for us to see each other any time, I hope you kindly accept my choice.
Please allow me to say sorry again and I trust that you will understand.
  Yours Sincerely,
   Li Ming
   
询问信：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a college student and am going to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA candidates. I am writing to ask if it is possible for you to provide some information concerning the reference books.
Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payments and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of my school by October 1, 2012.
Your prompt answer would be highly appreciated, and thank you in advance for your help.
   Yours truly,
  Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
道歉信：Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party. However, it is really nice of you to think of me for such a pleasant occasion.
The reason why I can’t take part to（用介词in） your party is that one of my overseas friends will come to visit me. It is quite out of my expectation, and it conflicts with your party. Though I myself like to attend your party very much, I expect to stay with her. After all, she will stay here only one day. Thinking that it is easier for us to see each other any time, I hope you kindly accept my choice.
Please allow me to say sorry again and I trust that you will understand.
  Yours Sincerely,
   Li Ming点评：8-9写的很不错，但要注意控制字数，
询问信：Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a college student and am going to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA candidates. I am writing to ask if it is possible for you to provide（加宾语me）some information concerning the reference books.
Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payments and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of my school by October 1, 2012.
Your prompt answer would be highly appreciated, and thank you in advance for your help.
   Yours truly,
  Li Ming 点评：9分写的很好，但是有很多模板内容。