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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to be a counsel of your firm. I graduated from XX University with a bachelor degree in law, and I would like to be considered for the post.
     I have confidence in my ability that I can handle the job because my work experience and my scholastic endeavors have thoroughly prepared me for employment in a company that specializes in various segments of law. And also I may be possess good communication skills and tremendous working enthusiasm. Then the most important merit is that I have passed National Judicial Examination.
     I am looking forward to joining your staff. Then, I would greatly appreciate any word you might send me regarding my application.
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to be a counsel of your firm. I graduated from XX University with a bachelor degree in law, and I would like to be considered for the post.  I have confidence in my ability that I can handle the job because my work experience and my scholastic endeavors have thoroughly prepared me for employment in a company that specializes in various segments of law. And also I may be possess（这里比较混乱，be后不能用动词原形，还是你想用maybe？） good communication skills and tremendous working enthusiasm. Then the most important merit is that I have passed National Judicial Examination.  I am looking forward to joining your staff. Then, I would greatly appreciate any word you might send me regarding my application.   Yours sincerely,   LiMing（落款谓语右下角）点评：7-8分语言功底不错，建议同学仔细的分析一下范文，看一下结构和思路，是你的表达更加有条理。