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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,
I am so sorry for I cannot manage to meetyou at the airport on time when you arrived . The reason is that I am the leader of a conference considering nobody can instand of me . So , please understand my situation sincerely .
That day , you arrived , please wait for me at the airport . I suggest that you can find a coffee bar have a sit and book some drinks or read magazines . I amdress an orange clothing then will call your phone .
I would like to express my apology once again . I look forward to meeting you .
    Yours,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Bob,
I am so sorry for I cannot manage to meetyou at the airport on time when you arrived. The reason is that I am the leader of a conference considering nobody can instand(拼写错误) of me. So, please understand my situation sincerely.
That day, you arrived(应该是after you arrive), please wait for me at the airport. I suggest that you can find a coffee bar have a sit(应该用名词) and book some drinks or read magazines. I amdress an(应该是dressed in) orange clothing then will(应该是and then I will) call your phone.
I would like to express my apology once again. I look forward to meeting you. Yours,Li Ming点评:6分语法错误有点多,同时需要加强你的表达能力。
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