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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I wish to apply for the position of a waitress in your restaurant wich you advertised in www.58.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume,which can help you know more about me.
    I am surethat I am competent at this jop.What give me such confidence for this job?Firstly,I am a very friendly person and I had been a manner-girl for the sportmeeting in school,what make me havewell behavior. Secondly ,I have enough energy for working in evening. Lastly,I notonly a hardworking person but aslo have the spirit of teamwork.
     I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my application letter . I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    yours,
    Li Mei
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I wish to apply for the position of a waitress in your restaurant wich（which） you advertised in www.58.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which can help you know more about me.I am surethat I am competent at this jop（拼写错误）.What give me such confidence for this job?Firstly, I am a very friendly personand I had been a manner-girl forthe sportmeeting（拼写错误） in school, what make（应该用第三人称单数形式makes）me havewell behavior. Secondly, I have enough energy for working in evening. Lastly,I （加am）notonly a hardworkingperson but aslo（应该是also）have the spirit of teamwork. I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my application letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.  yours（Yours）, Li Mei（题目中是李明）点评：7分写的还可以，但是拼写错误有点多，注意控制字数