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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to express my apologies that I forgot to take part in your birthday party last Sunday.
     The main cause is that I had a English exam last Sunday. I am very sorry that I am occupied by great number of English words 、grammer and essay, which is quite beyond my ability. So I could not bring to mind and participate in your birthday.
     I want to give you a screct precent to show my sincerity. I shall be obliged if you could accept my apologies. I am looking forward your reply.
     Yours respectfully,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,  I am writing this letter to express my apologies that I forgot to take part in your birthday party last Sunday.  The main cause is that I had a（an） English exam last Sunday. I am very sorry that I am（用过去时） occupied by great number of English words 、（英语中用逗号）grammer（拼写错误，用复数）and essay（用复数）, which is（用过去时） quite beyond my ability. So I could not bring to mind and participate in your birthday（应该是party）. I want to give you a screct precent（拼写错误） to show my sincerity. I shall be obliged if you could accept my apologies. I am looking forward（加介词to） your reply.  Yours respectfully, Li Ming点评：6分错误有点多，一定要注意细节。