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Dear Bob,
Last month, I agreed that I would like to visit Lijiang with you in early May. Unfortunately, my institute organized us to Shanghai for doing a market research on May Day. I deeply regret that I couldn't travel with you . Please forgive me for breaking an appointment.
Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you will be very sadly for this. I can either tour with you when I come back or go there on summer vacation. If you do not mind, you can also travel with me to shanghai for an unexpected travel.
Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.
    Faithfullyyours,
    Liming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
Last month, I agreed that I would like to visit Lijiang with you in early May. Unfortunately, my institute organized us to Shanghai for doing a market research on May Day. I deeply regret that I couldn't travel with you. Please forgive me for breaking an appointment.
Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you will be very sadly（用形容词） for this. I can either tour with you when I come back or go there on summer vacation. If you do not mind, you can also travel with me to shanghai（Shanghai）for an unexpected travel.
Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.   Faithfully yours, Liming（LiMing落款位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的很不错，注意控制字数，不要在格式上丢分。