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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I’m writing to make an apology to you for I left your book ”Go With Wind” which I borrowed from you last sunday. I found it gone in the morning. After looking for it everywhere, I am sure that it couldn’t be found. I am really sorry for that.
Now, could you tell me the name of the book store from which you bought the book? And, I would buy another for you ? If the book store is too far from my house, is it ok that I buy a book of the same edition? If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am sorry again for my carelessness.(Forgive me for my carelessness怎么样？) Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly, Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I’m writing to make an apology to you for I left（丢失，lost） your book ”Go With Wind”（英语中不用引号引用书名，Gone With The Wind） which I borrowed from you last sunday(Sunday). I found it gone in the morning. After looking for it everywhere, I am sure that it couldn’t be found. I am really sorry for that. Now, could you tell me the name of the book store from which you bought the book? And, I would buy another for you?（这是个陈述句，用句号） If the book store is too far from my house, is it ok that I buy a book of the same edition? If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Ming（落款分两行，位于右下角）点评：6分字数超出，要注意细节，模板中的内容比较多。