考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(452)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I am every much looking forward to see you.But recently I would have to take an important conference and I am very busy for ready for an exam these days.I regret to inform you that I am unable to meet you.
Please accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Affectionately,

Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am every（应该是very） much looking forward to see（前面的to是介词） you. But recently I would have to take an important conference and I am very busy for ready（改成in preparing） for an exam these days. I regret to inform you that I am unable to meet you.
Please accept my apologies and understand my situation.
（加Yours）Affectionately,
Li Ming点评：字数不够，不太符合考研小作文的要求，建议认真分析一下范文，看一下结构和思路。