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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing to make a sincere apology to you and ask for you forgiveness. Last night I forgot to hand in your homework and I felt sorry deeply for my careless.
     As I want to compensate for my mistake, I have sent an email to Professor Yang, attached with the Word document of your homework, to explain the reason of the delayed essay. I am now waiting for his reply and I will be responsible for any punishment my mistake may cause.
     I sorry again and I hope you can forgive me.
    Sincerely yours,
    LiMing
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to make a sincere apology to you and ask for you（应该用your） forgiveness. Last night I forgot to hand in your homework and I felt sorry deeply（两个单词换一下位置） for my careless（应该用名词）. As I want to compensate for my mistake, I have sent an email to Professor Yang, attached with the Word document of your homework, to explain the reason of the delayed essay. I am now waiting for his reply and I will be responsible for any punishment my mistake may cause. I sorry（注意这不是个动词） again and I hope you can forgive me.Sincerely yours,LiMing点评：7分写的比较不错，但是出现了几个明显的语法错误。