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Dear Bob,
     I am writing the letter in purpose of apologying that I forgot totake the book to you from my home.I was so hurry that I did not to think whether I had packed everything in mybag.HadI pay more attention,I would not made such stupid mistake.
     Now something must be down to crack this hard nut.There are two personaladvice as following.I would either let myMumsend it to you by expressing EMS,or nalternatively buy a new one to you as a gift.
    I really hope youcould accept my sincere apology and tell me which solutionyou like at your earliest convenience.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     YoursTruly,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing the letter in purpose ofapologying（apology是个名词，这里需要用动词的-ing形式） that I forgot totake the book to you from my home. I was so hurry that I did not to（去掉） think whether I had packed everything in mybag. HadI pay more attention, I would not made（应该用原形make） such stupid mistake. Now something must be down（应该是done） to crack this hard nut. There are twopersonaladvice（用复数，前面是two） as following. I would either let myMumsend it to you by expressing EMS, or nalternatively（拼写错误） buy a new one to you as a gift.I really hope youcould accept my sincere apology and tell me which solutionyou like at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. 【YoursTruly（t不用大写）, Li Ming】（落款位于右下角）点评：6分如果用模板上的内容，就一定不要出现错误。要注意细节，同时注意控制字数。