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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a student in this university who regular comes to the library to borrow books,and I'm writing to make an apology to you for I forget to return the book which I borrowed from library last month and it is due today.Yesterday,I have come back from shool for holiday and find it in my bag.I am so sorry that for any inconvenience my action may cause.
I'm in another province which be far away from our school,so I can't return the book on time.Will you please prolong the date for return?And I would return it as soon as possible when I come back to shool.Or I would like to send it to you through a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.
I'm sorry again for my carelessness.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly
  Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a student in this university who regular comes to the library to borrow books, and I'm writing to make an apology to you for I forget（应该用过去时） to return the book which I borrowed from library last month and it is due today. Yesterday, I have come back from shool（拼写错误）for holiday and find it in my bag. I am so sorry that（去掉，后面有for） for any inconvenience my action may cause.
I'm in another province which be（用is） far away from our school, so I can't return the book on time. Will you please prolong the date for return? And I would return it as soon as possible when I come back to shool（拼写错误）. Or I would like to send it to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I'm sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly（加逗号）
  Li Ming点评：6-7分字数超出比较多，要注意细节处。