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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I am writing to make an apology to you for I lost the english reference book which I borrowed fromed you last week.Yesterday I intended to return the book back to you,unfortunately,I couldn`t find it anywhere.I am so sorry that I have lost your book.
    The book which you lent me is enjoying a striking popularity in college campus,so I believe I can find another one in book store.I would like to buy a new one for you.
    I am sorry again for my carelessness,please accept my sincere appology for any inconveniences that I have caused. Looking forward to your reply.
     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing to make an apology to you for I lost the english（English） reference book which I borrowed fromed（from） you last week. Yesterday I intended to return the book back to you, unfortunately, I couldn`t find it anywhere. I am so sorry that I have lost your book.The book which you lent me is enjoying a striking popularity in college campus, so I believe I can find another one in book store. I would like to buy a new one for you.I am sorry again for my carelessness,（加连词and） please accept my sincere appology（拼写错误） for any inconveniences that I have caused. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的还不错，注意细节处。