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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing the letter to inform you that I want to take this opprutunity to express my sincere apology to you for my carelessness.
     I promised to bring you a polo shirt with the name of Beckham on it when I went to England. However, I was too busy to forget to buy the T shirt. When I sit on the plane flew back from British, I remembered my promis and felt very apology.
     To make up for my fault, I have bought another gift and sent it to you by Express Mail Service. I hope you would like it. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
      Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing the letter to inform you that I want to take this opprutunity（拼写错误） to express my sincere apology to you for my carelessness. I promised to bring you a polo shirt with the name of Beckham on it when I went to England. However, I was too busy to forget（这里应该用remember）to buy the T shirt. When I sit（应该用过去时） on the plane flew back from British, I remembered my promis（拼写错误）and felt very apology. To make up for my fault, I have bought another gift and sent it to you by Express Mail Service. I hope you would like it. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：7分写的还是不错的，要注意细节和拼写问题。