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Dear Bob，
     I am writing to make an apology to you for I cannot manage to meet you at the airport on time. Yesterday my teacher asked me to assist her with some tasks on the day you arrive. I'm sorry that I can't pick you up as soon as possible for your first time visiting Beijing.
     Beijing is a big city with complicated transportation，so I'm afraid you can hardly find my university by yourself. How about your waiting for me at the airport and I will get there soon after work? If you would like to wander about around the airport，I can send a detailed map to you. If there are any other solutions you like，please let me know.
     Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience it may cause.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob， I am writing to make an apology to you for I cannot manage to meet you at the airport on time. Yesterday my teacher asked me to assist her with some tasks on the day you arrive. I'm sorry that I can't pick you up as soon as possible for your first time visiting Beijing. Beijing is a big city with complicated transportation，so I'm afraid you can hardly find my university by yourself. How about your waiting（应该是you wait） for me at the airport and I will get there soon after work? If you would like to wander about around the airport，I can send a detailed map to you. If there are any other solutions you like，please let me know. Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience it may cause.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：8分写的很不错，注意控制字数。