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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing to say sorry for having forgotten to return favourite music CD to you when I left Canada. But please believe I had no intention to do it , just for left in a hurry .
     To compensate for this mistake there are three ways. You treasure the CD enormously, I know. I can either sent it to you by express mail or re-buying one in local while I indemnify a rise price by those way you can as soon as use it. If you do not mind ,however, I also would like to bring it back to you next time I go to there.
     Please tell me your choice or other your mind at your earliest convenience. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.
    Yours truly,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to say sorry for having forgotten to return（加your） favourite music CD to you when I left Canada. But please believe I had no intention to do it, just for left in a hurry. To compensate for this mistake there are three ways. You treasure the CD enormously, I know. I can either sent it to you by express mail or re-buying one in local while I indemnify a rise price（加and） by those way you can as soon as（加不定式to） use it. If you do not mind, however, I also would like to bring it back to you next time I go to there. Please tell me your choice or other your mind at your earliest convenience. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.Yours truly,Li Ming点评：6分注意控制字数。几乎是仿写的模板内容，虽然错误比较少，但是让人读起来很别扭，不是很通畅。