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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I’m writing to apologize for the delaying of writing back to you last week. As you know, your questions in the e-mail are of a little difficult. So I need some time to work them out. I hope it didn’t bring any convenience to you.
    Last week I received your e-mail with your doubts in education research activities, which are several really hard questions. I should have written back to you then, but at that time I was fully occupied with an important exam coming in last Friday. But now I have solved your questions in details. At the same time, to make up my fault I will provide you some reference booksof use, in the end of the e-mail you can obtain them. Hoping itcould help you with your research and study.
    Please allow me to say sorry again for my carelessness and look forward to your reply.
   
   
    Yours sincerely
   
    Li Ming

    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,I’m writing to apologize for the delaying of writing back to you last week. As you know, your questions in the e-mail are of（去掉，of后跟名词性结构）a little difficult. So I need some time to work them out. I hope it didn’t bring any convenience（应该是不方便inconvenience） to you.Last week I received your e-mail with your doubts in education research activities, which are several really hard questions. I should have written back to you then, but at that time I was fully occupied with an important exam coming in last Friday. But now I have solved your questions in details. At the same time, to make up my fault I will provide you some reference booksof use, in the end of the e-mail you can obtain them. Hoping itcould help you with your research and study.Please allow me to say sorry again for my carelessness and look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely（加逗号）Li Ming点评：6-7分字数超出的比较多，注意细节。