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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to make an apology for my carelessness of forgetting to return the book which I borrowed from you last week. Today when I am opening my bag, I find a book of you is lying in it. I am so sorry that you cannot read it.  The book is still on my desk, I will return to you in afternoon by Express Mail Service if you convince that you need it very quickly. If you don’t use it in time, I will return to you by some Common Express Service. Please let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my mistake.  Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience my carelessness may cause. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to make an apology for my carelessness of forgetting to return the book which I borrowed from you last week. Today when I am（建议去掉） opening my bag, I find（应该用过去时） a book of you（应该用yours） is（应该用过去时）lying in it. I am so sorry that you cannot read it.  The book is still on my desk, I will return to you in afternoon by Express Mail Service if you convince that you need it very quickly. If you don’t use it in time（这个词组是“及时”）, I will return to you by some Common Express Service. Please let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my mistake. （这句话可以去掉） Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience my carelessness may cause. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：7分一定要注意细节，小作文最好不要出错。另外注意控制字数。