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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to give you my deepapology owing to the broke watch and at the same time, I would like to beg foryour forgiveness.
     It is so sorry to break your favorite watch which you had spent much time on findingbecause of my carelessness. Whatever I say, there is no use to remedy what Ihad done. But I just want to tell you how guilty I have felt and I am veryregret to do make this silly thing happen.
     I would like to say sorry again for this misfortune thing. Would you please accept mysincere apology? And there is a gift which is present my apology appended this letter.
    Yours truly,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to give you my deepapology（这是两个词） owing to the broke（应该用过去分词broken） watch and at the same time, I would like to beg foryour（这是两个词） forgiveness. It is so sorry to break your favorite watch which you had spent much time on findingbecause（这是两个词） of my carelessness. Whatever I say, there is no use to remedy what I had done. But I just want to tell you how guilty I have felt and I am veryregret（这是两个词） to do（去掉） make this silly thing happen. I would like to say sorry again for this misfortune thing. Would you please accept mysincere（这是两个词） apology? And there is a gift which is present my apology appended this letter.Yours truly,Li Ming点评：7分一般解决的方案会放在第二段。注意细节。